The subjet of the home work of my soon , is to create un SUPERHEROS , with the description !
here is the work of julien , can you help me to correct the setence and the description please ?
(pour les membres parlant francais, le devoir de mon fils qui est en 6ème est d'inventer un super heros et de le décrire, voici sa description) :
Hello,
My favorite heroes is "Musclor Man" , He's eighteen years old.
He hasn't got pet, but he's funny !
his family hasn't got superpower, Musclor Man is the only one in this family.
He can steal and he can also freeze these opponents.
He can't cast speels at the end of his hand.
He's tall, thin and very strong.
He has got brown, small eyes.
These hairs are straight long and brown, he has got a round face and his nose is small.
February 2013
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