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  • a short biografy of John Lennon

  • The Beatles, after got a discographic contract with Parlophone, published the first song "love me do".
  • They were very famous immediately.
  • After a lot of song, concert and records The beatles desbanded in 1970 and John began writes only his song with his wife Yoko Ono, like Imagine.Jhon Lennon was born in 1940 in Liverpool.
  • When his parents deforced, his mother married an english soldier and John was left with his aunt Mimi, in Woolton.
  • During a concert of Quarrymen Jhon Lennon met Paul McCartney and after they founded in 1957 with Ringo Starr and George Harrison "the Beatles".
  • In 1963 john Lennon went away from aunt' s house, but he and the Beatles come to write some song there.
  • In 1971 Lennon published his first single records,power to peaple, where there are some song that talk of peace and hope idealists against the war in Vietnam.
  • During this time John Lennon wrote some song but he did' t publish records with their.
  • On november in 1980 he published the last records, Double Fantasy.
  • On 8th of dicember in 1980 a boy killed he in upper west side in New York.

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • The Beatles, after got a discographic contract with Parlophone, published the first song "love me do".
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
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  • câu 3
    • After a lot of song, concert and records The beatles desbanded in 1970 and John began writes only his song with his wife Yoko Ono, like Imagine.Jhon Lennon was born in 1940 in Liverpool.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • When his parents deforced, his mother married an english soldier and John was left with his aunt Mimi, in Woolton.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • During a concert of Quarrymen Jhon Lennon met Paul McCartney and after they founded in 1957 with Ringo Starr and George Harrison "the Beatles".
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • In 1963 john Lennon went away from aunt' s house, but he and the Beatles come to write some song there.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • In 1971 Lennon published his first single records,power to peaple, where there are some song that talk of peace and hope idealists against the war in Vietnam.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
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