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  • Statement of purpose

  • The philosophy of my life includes two phrases “I must do it myself” and “No difficulties- no development”.
  • And maybe this harks back to the fact of my being the eldest son in family, and I was being raised as leading echelon and supporter in the future for my little brother and sister.
  • So I had to early become self-consistent.
  • I demonstrated it, when I worked hard in secret and got money for taking the exams to abroad university, despite of parents’ ban.
  • Later, I could persuade them to let me go to Russia, when I had the decree of admission.
  • Study away from home had some difficulties, but thirst for knowledge and independence was stronger.
  • I chose department of electronic means design at Novosibirsk State Technical University, dreaming to develop an engineer’s creativity.
  • During first years of education I met my current scientific supervisor Greenberg Yakov Simhonovich, who was then just physics lecturer.
  • Now it is hard to believe that at a school I had troubles with physics up to upper school, when one great teacher layed the basis for liking to study physics.
  • After, when I became a student this thirst just raised due to so enthusiastic and inspired lections , especially about quantum mechanics.
  • I had never heard such lections before.
  • At that time I had discovered this world full of unbelievable thinks and quantum phenomena.
  • At the third year of education, when course of physics ended, Yakov Simhonovich offered me to work under his guidance and research nanomechanical resonators.
  • When you solve usual, though difficult tasks, you became glad, but when you work on unusual, above the course, new problems, you enjoy one ineffable feeling.
  • During the solving you had just one guideline, and it is your knowledge.
  • The first problem was connected with analysis of such resonators dynamics connected with an electrical resonator.
  • I felt excitement during formulation and solving the equations, and tried to explain the results throw fundamental knowledge of nature.
  • These results was published in materias of XI-th international conference “Actual Problems of Electronics Instrument Engineering” at 2012.
  • Numerical modelling of these results has shown that there is possibility to control the effective system damping by signal in a line.
  • And we hit upon an idea to use NMR like amplifying element and new task has given.
  • And a solution of this task has published in a scientific journal in our University.
  • I have mastered several methods, solving the tasks, they include: Fourier analysis, Bogolyubova-Mitropolskogo method of solving equations.
  • Publication about a system, where NMR used as a load in RF line was presented a year after at a next APEIP-2014 conference.
  • Modified telegrapher’s equations was formed and solved.
  • Also I was sent to a cryogenic lab in the Leinitz-Institute for Photonic Technologies in Jena (Germany) to improve my skills.
  • I was lucky to work on modern equipment, and to see the frontier of the quantum phenomenon study.
  • I was deeply impressed.
  • During this practicing I performed bandpass cryogenic filter filter measurements at different temperatures.
  • The results of these measurements were published in Review Scientific Instruments in 2013.
  • Guided by the necessity to deeply study the micro world and my second principle of life, I started the magistrate studies in the same university and chose “Micro and nanoelectronics” specialization.
  • By that time I managed to take part in an International conference dedicated to mesascopical phenomenon problems MSFA-2015.
  • There I presented a study on microwave diagnostics of nanomechanical resonators.
  • For the first time I witnessed how punditry from many different countries gathered in one place.
  • Many of them were familiar with each other for quite a long time, and it was very unusual to observe the interaction of people of different nationalities and from different countries.
  • On my opinion there was nothing more than pure science and the spirit of collaboration.
  • I wanted to become a significant part of these bonds and interactions.
  • In the current term, I was able to take part in parameter measurements of cryogenic amplifiers in the university lab.
  • It was a sort of revelation for me.
  • Next year I am to defend my magistrate diploma theses titled “Microwave diagnostics of mesoscopic quantum structures” and now I have to do final part connected with solving quantum regime.
  • During all three years as bachelor I visited different additional lectures on Quantum mechanics in different departments which had different practical focus.

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    • The philosophy of my life includes two phrases “I must do it myself” and “No difficulties- no development”.
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    • And maybe this harks back to the fact of my being the eldest son in family, and I was being raised as leading echelon and supporter in the future for my little brother and sister.
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    • I demonstrated it, when I worked hard in secret and got money for taking the exams to abroad university, despite of parents’ ban.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
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    • I chose department of electronic means design at Novosibirsk State Technical University, dreaming to develop an engineer’s creativity.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
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    • During first years of education I met my current scientific supervisor Greenberg Yakov Simhonovich, who was then just physics lecturer.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8
  • 문장 9
    • Now it is hard to believe that at a school I had troubles with physics up to upper school, when one great teacher layed the basis for liking to study physics.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9
  • 문장 10
    • After, when I became a student this thirst just raised due to so enthusiastic and inspired lections , especially about quantum mechanics.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 10
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    • At the third year of education, when course of physics ended, Yakov Simhonovich offered me to work under his guidance and research nanomechanical resonators.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 13
  • 문장 14
    • When you solve usual, though difficult tasks, you became glad, but when you work on unusual, above the course, new problems, you enjoy one ineffable feeling.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 14
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    • I felt excitement during formulation and solving the equations, and tried to explain the results throw fundamental knowledge of nature.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 17ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 17
  • 문장 18
    • These results was published in materias of XI-th international conference “Actual Problems of Electronics Instrument Engineering” at 2012.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 18ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 18
  • 문장 19
    • Numerical modelling of these results has shown that there is possibility to control the effective system damping by signal in a line.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 19ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 19
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    • I have mastered several methods, solving the tasks, they include: Fourier analysis, Bogolyubova-Mitropolskogo method of solving equations.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 22ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 22
  • 문장 23
    • Publication about a system, where NMR used as a load in RF line was presented a year after at a next APEIP-2014 conference.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 23ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 23
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    • Also I was sent to a cryogenic lab in the Leinitz-Institute for Photonic Technologies in Jena (Germany) to improve my skills.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 25ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 25
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    • Guided by the necessity to deeply study the micro world and my second principle of life, I started the magistrate studies in the same university and chose “Micro and nanoelectronics” specialization.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 30ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 30
  • 문장 31
    • By that time I managed to take part in an International conference dedicated to mesascopical phenomenon problems MSFA-2015.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 31ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 31
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    • Many of them were familiar with each other for quite a long time, and it was very unusual to observe the interaction of people of different nationalities and from different countries.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 34ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 34
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    • In the current term, I was able to take part in parameter measurements of cryogenic amplifiers in the university lab.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 37ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 37
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    • Next year I am to defend my magistrate diploma theses titled “Microwave diagnostics of mesoscopic quantum structures” and now I have to do final part connected with solving quantum regime.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 39ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 39
  • 문장 40
    • During all three years as bachelor I visited different additional lectures on Quantum mechanics in different departments which had different practical focus.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 40ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 40