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  • my last shopping

  • My last shopping in Jeddah, Red Sea Mall on 28 of Sep, was very amazing.
  • My sisters and my friends decided to go shopping because we wanted to have fun together.
  • The night before we decided to go shopping, my friend told us about the new collection.
  • She said " The have beautiful clothes".
  • Then, we decided to go shopping together.
  • We were so excited and happy.
  • When we went there, the weather was cold outside.
  • It was amazing and beautiful.
  • We had lots of fun.
  • We bought beautiful clothes, shoes, heels, watches, and make up.
  • We always love staying together and do beautiful things.
  • We stayed together in a cafe.
  • We were too happy.
  • After an hour, I was so sick and terrible.
  • I wanted to call my driver to go home.
  • I searched my phone in my bag.
  • I didn't find it.
  • I was so worried.
  • I went to the security.
  • I told him about that.
  • He took my friend's phone number to tell me if he find it.
  • Then, came a call to my friend was from my mother.
  • She told my friend about someone called her and told her he found her number in last calls list and called her to tell her the phone was with him, So she called my friend to tell me about that.
  • I met that boy and took my phone from him.
  • After that, everything was calm.
  • We learnt how to have fun together and check our bags before we go to anyplace.

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