Korjaukset

Text from Nooralhuda22 - English

  • trip

  • One day .I and my family went to a trip .It was excited , but there was something wrong.we had other family went with us .they had a servent .she didn't bring the passport.
  • The police didn't allow to enter the UAE .we was late .after 2 hour's we moved .My brother sat with the house made because she forgot the passport.

AUTA KORJAAMAAN JOKAINEN LAUSE! - English

  • Otsikko
  • Lause 1
    • One day .I and my family went to a trip .It was excited , but there was something wrong.we had other family went with us .they had a servent .she didn't bring the passport.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 1
  • Lause 2
    • The police didn't allow to enter the UAE .we was late .after 2 hour's we moved .My brother sat with the house made because she forgot the passport.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 2