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  • I decided to apply to an internship for a post in the financial department of XXX, because I study Math and I have strong analytical skills.
  • I'm a student of the chair of mathematical statistics and random processes at MSU, and I hope my mathematical skills will help me a lot during this internship.
  • I passed two special courses “Supplementary chapters of the theory of probabilities” and “Supplementary chapters of mathematical statistics”.
  • Next term I’m going to attend a data analysis workshop at this chair.
  • I’m an awardee of 5 olympiads in Mathematics and 2 in Physics.
  • Also, I used to play chess well; I have 7 medals from different competitions.
  • I have no working experience, but I wish to implement the mathematical skills I have obtained in the real world.
  • XXX selects its personnel thoroughly, so I’m sure I will get a professional mentor, who will give me new knowledge and will teach me important practical skills.
  • And that’s why I feel certain of the fact that your company is the best place for me to start.

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    • I decided to apply to an internship for a post in the financial department of XXX, because I study Math and I have strong analytical skills.
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    • I'm a student of the chair of mathematical statistics and random processes at MSU, and I hope my mathematical skills will help me a lot during this internship.
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    • I passed two special courses “Supplementary chapters of the theory of probabilities” and “Supplementary chapters of mathematical statistics”.
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    • I have no working experience, but I wish to implement the mathematical skills I have obtained in the real world.
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    • XXX selects its personnel thoroughly, so I’m sure I will get a professional mentor, who will give me new knowledge and will teach me important practical skills.
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