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  • park

  • there is a park called central memorial park. it's not bigger than other parks but it is popular arund my residents.
  • it is right behind my house. so it is great location and easy to go to the park. it is accessibility.
  • oneside, there is a place which is people can play basketball and the other side, there is a plat ground. and then you can see wild green area with a water foundation and picnic area. so sometimes you can see watet jet from the foundation.
  • I really like going to the park, it makes me relax and refreash.
  • yesterday, i visted the park. i thought ,after dinner, it was quie nice weather to walk around. so i did. i also like walking alone.
  • i felt i could oranized my thinkings while i walked.

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