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correct my diary please thank u !
I`m lucky girl. thesedays I have to think positive at everything it`s not easy, but time goes by It`s better and easy.
I start my work?(job).my company workers are very kind. so I`m happy.
My new plan is make money and save.
because i`m going to another country for study tourism This is my 2015year goals I have dream, so happy thesedays !

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- correct my diary please thank u !
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 제목
문장 1
- I`m lucky girl. thesedays I have to think positive at everything it`s not easy, but time goes by It`s better and easy.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I start my work?(job).my company workers are very kind. so I`m happy.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- My new plan is make money and save.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- because i`m going to another country for study tourism This is my 2015year goals I have dream, so happy thesedays !
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4