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Văn bản từ Mialee - English

  • Perfume

  • I have brought a bottle of perfume last week.
  • I had no interest about perfume untill I known a saying that the lady without perfume hasn't perspect.
  • I have no idea about perfume, but it aroused my curiosity, and made me try to buy one.I browsed the online maket, then found a band "5th Avenue"which is the symbol of modern and fashion in my mind.
  • Sprayed perfume on my hand,it seem a garden arose in front of me, with enjoying different fragrances of 3 notes, realising why woman are carzy about perfume.

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
  • câu 2
    • I had no interest about perfume untill I known a saying that the lady without perfume hasn't perspect.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • I have no idea about perfume, but it aroused my curiosity, and made me try to buy one.I browsed the online maket, then found a band "5th Avenue"which is the symbol of modern and fashion in my mind.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • Sprayed perfume on my hand,it seem a garden arose in front of me, with enjoying different fragrances of 3 notes, realising why woman are carzy about perfume.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4