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Do you like what kind of shoes, comfortable or fashion?
That really depends, if I want to do some sports, I prefer the comfortable shoes, because I don’t want to hurt myself in the activities.
But on the other situation.
For example, at some formal party I prefer some fashion shoes.
Because you need show respect to the host.
So in my opinion, the environment is the main reason what kind of shoes I need to choose.

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- That really depends, if I want to do some sports, I prefer the comfortable shoes, because I don’t want to hurt myself in the activities.
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- But on the other situation.
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- For example, at some formal party I prefer some fashion shoes.
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- Because you need show respect to the host.
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- So in my opinion, the environment is the main reason what kind of shoes I need to choose.
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