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Hi my names is Marco
Hi, my names is Marco now I studing English in my country ( Italy ) and I want to perfectionable my English becouse in the future ( this summer ) I'm going to move in Ireland for search a job.
Is correct this phrase?
Thanks a lot Best regards

Title
- Hi my names is Marco
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- Hi, my names is Marco now I studing English in my country ( Italy ) and I want to perfectionable my English becouse in the future ( this summer ) I'm going to move in Ireland for search a job.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- Is correct this phrase?
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- Thanks a lot Best regards
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3