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  • The first Pakistani immigrants made mediocre jobs as newspaper seller.Now, there are much fewer immigrants who make these jobs because their children were born in England and are more educated.There are also the Chinese stores of corner of street which disappear little by little because the children of immigrants refuse to take back the family store.For example, since 10 last one years, the number of manufacturers and sellers of tobacco to be decreased in 25 %.This decline is due to a change of attitude of the children of the immigrants; as they received a better education they want one works paid well with good perspectives while their parents worked hours for a starvation wage.The children of Chinese immigrants are rarely inspired

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    • The first Pakistani immigrants made mediocre jobs as newspaper seller.Now, there are much fewer immigrants who make these jobs because their children were born in England and are more educated.There are also the Chinese stores of corner of street which disappear little by little because the children of immigrants refuse to take back the family store.For example, since 10 last one years, the number of manufacturers and sellers of tobacco to be decreased in 25 %.This decline is due to a change of attitude of the children of the immigrants; as they received a better education they want one works paid well with good perspectives while their parents worked hours for a starvation wage.The children of Chinese immigrants are rarely inspired
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