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Now, I'd like to tell you about some words about the stock characters: Holly and Gerry Kennedy.
Holly was a 30 year woman with long blond hair and a charming smile.
She was only 23 when Holly with her husband had marriage.
She very loved her husband and they dreamed to live very long and have a very happy family, Gerry was a perfect man with good sense of humour.
He wasn't so tall but Holly felt safe when he stood beside her.His body was strong and perfectly toned.
Gerry liked football and spent hours in the gym.
Also he adored to sing songs and travelled the world together with his wife.

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- Now, I'd like to tell you about some words about the stock characters: Holly and Gerry Kennedy.
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- Holly was a 30 year woman with long blond hair and a charming smile.
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- She was only 23 when Holly with her husband had marriage.
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- She very loved her husband and they dreamed to live very long and have a very happy family, Gerry was a perfect man with good sense of humour.
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- He wasn't so tall but Holly felt safe when he stood beside her.His body was strong and perfectly toned.
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- Gerry liked football and spent hours in the gym.
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- Also he adored to sing songs and travelled the world together with his wife.
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