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  • Jonathan first time visit to Jakarta,he very excited n happy came to Jakarta than i ask to him what r you doing here?he answer for traveling so i explain to him visit to bandung n beyond cos bandhung has alot of tourism object,,Mr Jonathan very excited n he has plan visit there.

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    • Jonathan first time visit to Jakarta,he very excited n happy came to Jakarta than i ask to him what r you doing here?he answer for traveling so i explain to him visit to bandung n beyond cos bandhung has alot of tourism object,,Mr Jonathan very excited n he has plan visit there.
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