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its really cold in israel right now
The weather in israel right now is horrible.
it has been raining for more than a week and its really, really, Really cold outside.
Im not a fan of winter and cold weather.I love summer better.
i just cant stand the cold.

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句子 1
- The weather in israel right now is horrible.
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句子 2
- it has been raining for more than a week and its really, really, Really cold outside.
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句子 3
- Im not a fan of winter and cold weather.I love summer better.
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- i just cant stand the cold.
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