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A problem of learning to live again without a dear person.
It was very hard.
But Gerry helped Holly to cope with pain.
He had even thought of his idea writing some letters for Holly shortly before his death.
Holly read the long - awaited message from the dearest person. 2.
A problem of finding yourself in life.
Gerry advised Holly to find a job she enjoy.
She believed in herself and found her dreams job.

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- A problem of learning to live again without a dear person.
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- It was very hard.
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- But Gerry helped Holly to cope with pain.
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- He had even thought of his idea writing some letters for Holly shortly before his death.
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- Holly read the long - awaited message from the dearest person. 2.
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- A problem of finding yourself in life.
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- Gerry advised Holly to find a job she enjoy.
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- She believed in herself and found her dreams job.
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