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Early my exam
This is early my English exam.
I must choose three theme.
This is the first theme: The moonwalk London is a marathon.
I choose to speak about this theme because it's a big manifestation for the awareness for vital breast cancer causes.
With this marathon, the charity "Walk the Walk" committed to raising money for looking this sick.
So, this running is for women, but men can participate !
The moonwalk London is in streets of London, and in Hyde Park, the challenge starts and finishes at Battersea Power Station.

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- Early my exam
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句子 1
- This is early my English exam.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I must choose three theme.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- This is the first theme: The moonwalk London is a marathon.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I choose to speak about this theme because it's a big manifestation for the awareness for vital breast cancer causes.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- With this marathon, the charity "Walk the Walk" committed to raising money for looking this sick.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- So, this running is for women, but men can participate !
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- The moonwalk London is in streets of London, and in Hyde Park, the challenge starts and finishes at Battersea Power Station.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7