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My mysterious girl
When I saw her face Shining like the the stars in a lonely night I thought was a dream I desired it was real.
She gave me only one thing: An unforgettable smile.
It was sufficient to make me cry When she left on that street.
Oh how I'd like to see her again Just to tell her one only word: Love...
Why didn't she come back?
Sometimes I just can feel the smell of her hair's fragrance.
Maybe one day I could meet her And smiling ask her name.
Or maybe not, I just have to call her My mysterious girl.

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- When I saw her face Shining like the the stars in a lonely night I thought was a dream I desired it was real.
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- She gave me only one thing: An unforgettable smile.
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- It was sufficient to make me cry When she left on that street.
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- Oh how I'd like to see her again Just to tell her one only word: Love...
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문장 5
- Why didn't she come back?
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- Sometimes I just can feel the smell of her hair's fragrance.
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문장 7
- Maybe one day I could meet her And smiling ask her name.
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문장 8
- Or maybe not, I just have to call her My mysterious girl.
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