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My fisrt trip to Cyprus
I went to Cyprus 2 years ago for holidays.
I was there almost one month.
I visited many archaelogical places and museums.
I'm intrested in those subjects, because I'm classical philologist and Cyprus was a very important place in ancient world, because the people thought there Aphrodite was born.
I enjoyed the beatiful landscapes of the island and the so kind people.
For these reasons, I recommend to visit this country.

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- I went to Cyprus 2 years ago for holidays.
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- I was there almost one month.
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- I visited many archaelogical places and museums.
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- I'm intrested in those subjects, because I'm classical philologist and Cyprus was a very important place in ancient world, because the people thought there Aphrodite was born.
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- I enjoyed the beatiful landscapes of the island and the so kind people.
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- For these reasons, I recommend to visit this country.
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