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Today, my original plan was to finish my English paper, but I couldn't do that because I played for a long time.
I have a bad handwriting so I want to practise it .
(I don't want to see my handwriting anymore) I planed to use my holiday well when I was in the school,I can't wast my time anymore.

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문장 1
- Today, my original plan was to finish my English paper, but I couldn't do that because I played for a long time.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I have a bad handwriting so I want to practise it .
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- (I don't want to see my handwriting anymore) I planed to use my holiday well when I was in the school,I can't wast my time anymore.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3