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London
London, the capital of United Kingdom is a city where lived one million people in 19th century, it was the biggest town in the world.
That's why this city needs to have a subway (several train lines underground) .
And in 1836, the first line of subway to be built from London Bridge in Central London to Greewich.
Then, firstable, we will try to find why London was need to buid à subway and after, we will try to know how the London Underground emerged.

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- London, the capital of United Kingdom is a city where lived one million people in 19th century, it was the biggest town in the world.
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- That's why this city needs to have a subway (several train lines underground) .
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- And in 1836, the first line of subway to be built from London Bridge in Central London to Greewich.
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- Then, firstable, we will try to find why London was need to buid à subway and after, we will try to know how the London Underground emerged.
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