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My English.
Hello everybody!
I learn English, because I need it in my future job.
I would like to be a translater.
My English teacher told me that if I communicate with native speakers, I shall learn it quiker.
So I registered here.
And I hope that it will help me.
My English is not very well, but I want to learn it.

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문장 1
- Hello everybody!
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문장 2
- I learn English, because I need it in my future job.
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- I would like to be a translater.
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문장 4
- My English teacher told me that if I communicate with native speakers, I shall learn it quiker.
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- So I registered here.
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문장 6
- And I hope that it will help me.
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- My English is not very well, but I want to learn it.
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