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Appe with the Iphone6
Cellphone's market share of Apple in Korea is over 30% at the first, because the brand-new cellphones such as Iphone6, Iphone6+ are sold well.
According the CounterPoint, a Market Search Company, Apple's market share in Korea reached to 33% on November.
After Apple started to sell them, it has expanded dramatically market share.
Until before, the market share of Apple was from 5 percent to 15 percent at most.

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- Cellphone's market share of Apple in Korea is over 30% at the first, because the brand-new cellphones such as Iphone6, Iphone6+ are sold well.
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- According the CounterPoint, a Market Search Company, Apple's market share in Korea reached to 33% on November.
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- After Apple started to sell them, it has expanded dramatically market share.
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- Until before, the market share of Apple was from 5 percent to 15 percent at most.
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