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Teks daripada -Tatyana- - English

Hello everyone!
Hello everyone!
I'm 16 years old.
I really want to learn english language, because it's so interesting to speak in other language!
I know, my english is not very well now, but I'll try do it better.

Title
- Hello everyone!
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- Hello everyone!
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- I'm 16 years old.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- I really want to learn english language, because it's so interesting to speak in other language!
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
Ayat 4
- I know, my english is not very well now, but I'll try do it better.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4