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Music is my life
Piano is my favorite musical instrument.
I've been playing the piano for 10 years.
I can't imagine my life without piano, because it really helps me to relax.
So, my favorite phrase about music is "Music creates the feelings, which you can't find in life".

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- Piano is my favorite musical instrument.
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- I've been playing the piano for 10 years.
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- I can't imagine my life without piano, because it really helps me to relax.
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- So, my favorite phrase about music is "Music creates the feelings, which you can't find in life".
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