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I turn kindly asked to accept the building coldroom in warhouse No.
5 which we rent from the state , the request enclose drawing buildings , while committed to remove all of the changes in the event of termination ( expiry ) of the lease

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- 5 which we rent from the state , the request enclose drawing buildings , while committed to remove all of the changes in the event of termination ( expiry ) of the lease
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