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從toffee65來的文本 - English

  • My work

  • Not so long ago i am became a student.
  • As soon as i left of native city and became live without parents, i started looking a job.
  • Now i working in night club a waitress.
  • My family not like my work and because it we often quarrel.
  • But for me this work good.
  • I det on well with the team and meet new people.
  • Visitor very like my service and this is important.

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