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  • My Mother

  • when i was young, i lived in my hometown with my grandparents.
  • Because of distance beetween me and my parents I just met they at the end of year.
  • It's too short time.
  • So my love for her isn't so much like other children.
  • Sometimes I hate her, I think that she don't love me as much as my younger brother. I'm jealous !
  • After 18 years of living out of my parents, i'm living with them.
  • Finally, my family are full of members.
  • I see that my mother loves me more than I can think.
  • I have enough time to recognise why she didn't visit us more.
  • She spent all time to earn money for us studying.
  • I feel I'm a bad child.
  • I want to do something for her but i don't know what I should do.
  • Although I have never ever showed my love by giving gifts or flowers in holidays but from depth of my heart, Ilove you so so much.
  • My daddy has pass away for 5 years I will do all things to protet her

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