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Hi. I'm new to here.
I'm here to learn English and Spanish.
I can write English a bit but I'm still not good enough.
I hope I can improve my writing here and help other people who's learning Korean.
I'm learning Spanish too but it's only been a few days.
So all i know is 'hola!', 'adios', 'gracias!'.
If i get better in my Spanish, I will write here in both Spanish and English.
By the way I also decided to stop smoking I hope i success both in quitting smoking and learning Spanish.

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- Hi. I'm new to here.
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- I'm here to learn English and Spanish.
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- I can write English a bit but I'm still not good enough.
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- I hope I can improve my writing here and help other people who's learning Korean.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
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- I'm learning Spanish too but it's only been a few days.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
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- So all i know is 'hola!', 'adios', 'gracias!'.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
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- If i get better in my Spanish, I will write here in both Spanish and English.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
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- By the way I also decided to stop smoking I hope i success both in quitting smoking and learning Spanish.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7