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my present!
Hi! today i got my birthday present from my childhood friends.
Actually today its not my birthday but because they were busy and we are living in the different city now , they came here today.
Im so excited because i really really missed them a lot.
We always celebrate our birthday together.

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문장 1
- Hi! today i got my birthday present from my childhood friends.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- Actually today its not my birthday but because they were busy and we are living in the different city now , they came here today.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- Im so excited because i really really missed them a lot.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- We always celebrate our birthday together.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4