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Pop music
I love pop music, it helps me happier and more relax after school.
I started listening to pop music everyday when I was in grade 7.
When I was surfing the web, I saw a Korean music band.
This band had 7 little girls, they were so cute and talent.
During 2 years later, I had been only listening to Korean songs.
But one day, my friend made me listen to US and UK songs, I was impressed by Taylor Swift's and The Wanted's voices.

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- I love pop music, it helps me happier and more relax after school.
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- I started listening to pop music everyday when I was in grade 7.
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- When I was surfing the web, I saw a Korean music band.
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- This band had 7 little girls, they were so cute and talent.
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- During 2 years later, I had been only listening to Korean songs.
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- But one day, my friend made me listen to US and UK songs, I was impressed by Taylor Swift's and The Wanted's voices.
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