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Text from echo_p - English

  • Essey "Our children will live in a worse environment then we do

  • I think our children will live in a worse environment then we do.
  • I want them to live in another way, but it is impossible.
  • I have the such opinion because the environmental situation in the world goes on deteriorating.
  • For example, it is generally believed that level of urbanization is increasing, so our children will live in cities which full of fumes and have the horrible ecology condition.
  • Also it will many problems and they will develop year in year out.
  • There are many reasons in present for saying that we live in terrible environment.
  • There are global warming, the greenhouse effect, deforestation, shortage of fresh water, waste dumping, burying nuclear wastes, air, water and soil pollutions and many others.
  • And practice shows that people don't think about their destroying influence on the planet until the last moment.
  • It is unlikely to be some improvement in protecting environment in the near future.
  • Of course, some people take some action and try to preserve our environment.
  • They understand that people can kill the planet by their harmful activities.
  • And if we don't stop in time, it will be nothing to save.
  • But it is unknown how will live our children if nobody start take care about out future.

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