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  • letter of motivation

  • Laura Duraes 7 rue du chateau Montbéliard - France - 25200 Phone number: 06 64 16 47 16 E-mail : duraeslaura@gmail.com Montbéliard, le 09/0272015 nom entreprise adresse ville pays code postal Dear Sir, Mr, I'm training in mechanical engineering , design and ergonomics , I seek an opportunity to do an internship in the office for a period of 6 months from September 2015 in February 2016.
  • This is why I would like to send you my candidacy to join one of your teams.
  • I did an internship at the end of study in BAC +2 to Multiple Global Design company in Switzerland (Chaux -de-Fonds), where I worked on innovative projects by working with engineers in the field of appliances.
  • Today I want to join a dynamic team with which I could apply my skills, my qualities and my motivation to work.
  • I am a person who has an eye for detail and loves organized labor .
  • Wishing my training and my experiences are useful to you , I thank you for the attention you will bring to the examination of my resume included in my Book.
  • I remain at your disposal for any further information or for an appointment, it will suit you to offer me .
  • In the meantime , please accept, Madam , Sir, the assurances of my highest consideration.
  • Yours faithfully, Laura Duraes

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    • Laura Duraes 7 rue du chateau Montbéliard - France - 25200 Phone number: 06 64 16 47 16 E-mail : duraeslaura@gmail.com Montbéliard, le 09/0272015 nom entreprise adresse ville pays code postal Dear Sir, Mr, I'm training in mechanical engineering , design and ergonomics , I seek an opportunity to do an internship in the office for a period of 6 months from September 2015 in February 2016.
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    • I did an internship at the end of study in BAC +2 to Multiple Global Design company in Switzerland (Chaux -de-Fonds), where I worked on innovative projects by working with engineers in the field of appliances.
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    • Wishing my training and my experiences are useful to you , I thank you for the attention you will bring to the examination of my resume included in my Book.
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