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  • Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to you to express my interest in the position as a sales coordinator at your hotel, which I read at the local newspaper on 6th February.
  • My name is Silvia Winzap, I am 20 years old and work as a business woman in the local bank.
  • Before I have completed my commercial apprenticeship in an accounting office.
  • In my present job I can gain a lot of experience in the project management department.
  • My responsibilities include to make project reports for the whole bank.
  • In this activity, I have to deal with different people from different areas.
  • I also deepen my knowledge of Microsoft Products, when I prepare a various presentations.
  • Because of my interest in the hotel industry, I make further training in foreign languages, because they play an important role in this area.
  • I offer you an efficient, reliable and self-employed working method.
  • Furthermore, I own a strong team spirit.
  • I count my interest to organize things as my personal strengths.
  • Additionally, I am convinced that I find my way in the area of responsibility of a sales coordinator quickly and I look forward to further developing my skills at your hotel.
  • I am pleased tob e invited for an interview and I am looking forward to your positive feedback.
  • Yours faithfully

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