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  • Photo Description

  • It's a photo of day.
  • Maybe, in a park.
  • There are a linie of chairs at the left of photo.
  • All are grey, one draw of green.
  • In the last one there is a man sit down.
  • He have white hair and beard, brown scarf and brown jaquet.
  • Dark trousers, socks and shoes.
  • He have a white bag to the right site.
  • To the left, he have a paper bin.
  • The chairs divide de photo in two planes.
  • Behind green sward, before grey asphalt.
  • At the bottom we can see few trees.
  • People sit in banks. Cars parked.
  • Thanks for your comments.
  • You can see the photo here: http://www.laculturaefimera.com/2011/06/giannini-una-filosofia-para-lo.html

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