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  • Keeping animals in the zoos

  • There is no doubt that the subject of keeping animals in zoos creates a lot of discutions.
  • Some people believe that zoos aregood for animals and occur thaditional familly entertamente.
  • Other thinks that keeping animals in the zoos is cruel and inhumane.
  • One advantage of the zoos protektion for endangered spesies.
  • In addition you can visit them to see animals you don`t normaly fined in your country.
  • In my opinion this makes people more likely to want to look after animals and protect their natural habitats.
  • on the other hand , there are many arguments against keeping animals in zoos.
  • There is no doubt that if the animal is taken out of it`s natyral habitay they forget their natural skills.
  • Sometimes unwanted animals are sold to circuses or hunting parks.
  • Another drawback is that animals sometimes escape from their enclosures, which is dangerous for humans.

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