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  • Carnival

  • A few days ago, Carnival stared in Germany.
  • I'm really excited to wear my Costume and watch one of the carnival parade's today.
  • I'm going to wear a soldier costume.
  • It's like a overall, and i think it looks really awesome.
  • My bestfriend will wear a Tiger costume or a top gun costume.
  • The carnival parade starts around 18:30 pm and ends at 3:00 am but we're not goingto stay til 3:00 am because it's really late and no one could pick us up.
  • That's why we'll only stay til 12:00 pm.
  • I hope that everyone has fun and a really great evening.

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