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today afternoon my friend took me to a Japanese learning organization to make chocolates. they were all learners, but i was just to play. i seldom understood what the foreign teacher said, but the Japanese teacher was very friendly. the chocolates in PPT looks so delicious, but in fact, we just had the original chocolates melted and put them to mould. so they had all kinds of shapes...then taking them to icebox..finaly they were ok..though they smells good, i didn't dare to eat..i planed to send them to my friends. i don't know if it's ok...←v←