Korjaukset

Text from tracyzhu - English

  • We All Have Secrets

  • It is interesting that the day before yesteday which my good friend told me about his childhood .Gradually,we shared more things and we talked about secrets or something like that .I told him that my sister misunderstood he is my boy friend before and we all broke into laughing after hearing that.As we all know,sometimes someone would thinks that we have many secrets which we didn't tell them in the psat,but it seems that they all are wrong .
  • There are following reasons why we own secrets and we keep them.Firstly,we are growing and we are being mature when we can slove some problems by ourselves.Secondly,sometimes we are generous to share our secrets and just people don't know what we tell them are something important .Finaly,if our partents or friends are devote to exploring our little secrets ,it will lead us to show our inimical mentality and even being angry.
  • However,not only should we share our secrets or not is a thing which we can make our own decisions ,but also all of us should have some secrets which can help us to create our space.

AUTA KORJAAMAAN JOKAINEN LAUSE! - English

  • Otsikko
  • Lause 1
    • It is interesting that the day before yesteday which my good friend told me about his childhood .Gradually,we shared more things and we talked about secrets or something like that .I told him that my sister misunderstood he is my boy friend before and we all broke into laughing after hearing that.As we all know,sometimes someone would thinks that we have many secrets which we didn't tell them in the psat,but it seems that they all are wrong .
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 1
  • Lause 2
    • There are following reasons why we own secrets and we keep them.Firstly,we are growing and we are being mature when we can slove some problems by ourselves.Secondly,sometimes we are generous to share our secrets and just people don't know what we tell them are something important .Finaly,if our partents or friends are devote to exploring our little secrets ,it will lead us to show our inimical mentality and even being angry.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 2
  • Lause 3
    • However,not only should we share our secrets or not is a thing which we can make our own decisions ,but also all of us should have some secrets which can help us to create our space.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 3