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  • The great experience

  • I was impressed to Mr. Sony whom his experience was very interesting, strated with his experience when he was in college,and met with the other people that was different culture,custom,and language. i thought , he graduates from top university in indonesia, but in the fact he was not.
  • I realize that how successful he was.And now he was continuing his study in univesity of jogjakarta for doctor,and i got the point from this story that everywhere we studied, it was depend on yourself,so what we wanted, it should be allowed by effort and prayer.

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    • I was impressed to Mr. Sony whom his experience was very interesting, strated with his experience when he was in college,and met with the other people that was different culture,custom,and language. i thought , he graduates from top university in indonesia, but in the fact he was not.
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    • I realize that how successful he was.And now he was continuing his study in univesity of jogjakarta for doctor,and i got the point from this story that everywhere we studied, it was depend on yourself,so what we wanted, it should be allowed by effort and prayer.
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