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  • I'd like to live in Ireland

  • From a little time,I'm thinking to go to live that place because makes me dream,I like the rivers,lakes and the green that it make a paradise to practise my sport prefer that is fishing,then also to practise better my english that it's so so.I hope that a day this my dream will be able to realize it.

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    • From a little time,I'm thinking to go to live that place because makes me dream,I like the rivers,lakes and the green that it make a paradise to practise my sport prefer that is fishing,then also to practise better my english that it's so so.I hope that a day this my dream will be able to realize it.
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