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Music that I like
This is my first text in english, so, have mercy (: I'd like to talk about the music that I like and how I had access to it.
First, I had started with the current music from my country (I live in Argentina) but quickly I've started to find the origins of them and I found the greatest exponents of the Argentinian rock like Luis Alberto Spinetta and Charly Garcia.
After a time, I met the music that inspired the early Argentinian rock and i fell in love with The Beatles, Pink Floyd and The Doors.
Even tough the argentinian musicians are not as known as Beatles or Rolling Stones, here we can find lots of great artists.
However, now, I'm trying to hear music only in english, so I can get more acquainted with the language. Thanks!

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- Music that I like
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câu 1
- This is my first text in english, so, have mercy (: I'd like to talk about the music that I like and how I had access to it.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
câu 2
- First, I had started with the current music from my country (I live in Argentina) but quickly I've started to find the origins of them and I found the greatest exponents of the Argentinian rock like Luis Alberto Spinetta and Charly Garcia.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
câu 3
- After a time, I met the music that inspired the early Argentinian rock and i fell in love with The Beatles, Pink Floyd and The Doors.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
câu 4
- Even tough the argentinian musicians are not as known as Beatles or Rolling Stones, here we can find lots of great artists.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
câu 5
- However, now, I'm trying to hear music only in english, so I can get more acquainted with the language. Thanks!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5