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  • Spring Fever

  • Spring is complimented a lot by Chinese, because it is the first season of year, all life being started.As an old Chinese saying"Make your whole year's plan in spring, and make your whole day's plan in the morning".However,spring brings rain and increases the dampness of air.
  • The city are grey, moist and sticky everywhere.I really don't like the weather of spring, because it make me tired all day.Only am I interested in sleeping, even no engry to have fun.Also I would be forgetable in spring, with a vacant mind.For example, I forgot my phone at home, I borrowed other teacher's phone to send a message of good-bye to my friend who left China to Australia for her further studying.How can I left my phone in a such important day.

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    • Spring is complimented a lot by Chinese, because it is the first season of year, all life being started.As an old Chinese saying"Make your whole year's plan in spring, and make your whole day's plan in the morning".However,spring brings rain and increases the dampness of air.
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    • The city are grey, moist and sticky everywhere.I really don't like the weather of spring, because it make me tired all day.Only am I interested in sleeping, even no engry to have fun.Also I would be forgetable in spring, with a vacant mind.For example, I forgot my phone at home, I borrowed other teacher's phone to send a message of good-bye to my friend who left China to Australia for her further studying.How can I left my phone in a such important day.
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