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CONGRATULATIONS
Dear Paul!
I hope you don't mind receiving a letter from me.
I saw the date of your birthday on your Facebook.
Congratulations at this happy day.
The best of all good things for this birthday and all the many more to come.
Best regards, Hortezija

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标题
- CONGRATULATIONS
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Dear Paul!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I hope you don't mind receiving a letter from me.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I saw the date of your birthday on your Facebook.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Congratulations at this happy day.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- The best of all good things for this birthday and all the many more to come.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- Best regards, Hortezija
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6