Korjaukset

Text from Ethar - English

  • living in a big city

  • Living in a big city has changed the lives for all people.
  • Big city has changed their ideas with the new cultures and traditions.
  • However, there are several serious disadvantages to living in a big city, concerning health, communication, traffic issues.
  • There are lots of disadvantages for living in a big city.
  • Firstly, living in a big city has made people communicate with others and socialize themselves with different cultures.
  • They can find different activities to do such as; visiting new places, knowing new museums, and going to the gym…etc.
  • Also, there are lots of places to visit for example; different restaurants, museums, parks, and gardens.
  • Finally, living in a big city makes you more sophisticated because big cities are cosmopolitan.
  • While these advantages are amazing, there are also lots of disadvantages.
  • First, It's very polluted, so it's not healthy.
  • Also, the traffic is too bad.
  • You always will be late when you go to your school, work, hospital, and park.
  • It has lots of cars that cause several accidents.
  • Finally, living in a big city cannot help old people to have peace and quite life because the city's life is noisy and crowded.
  • To sum up, I think living in a big city is exciting.
  • However, people can find some problems, so we must go for a trip has a clearly air and quietly sound.

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