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Rock star party
Tonight I go in concert with my new friend Piter.
He is working in the Moscow's club, when will be a party.
I love rock music.
Love when a young man takes his guitar and plays wildly Solo.

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- Tonight I go in concert with my new friend Piter.
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- He is working in the Moscow's club, when will be a party.
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- I love rock music.
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- Love when a young man takes his guitar and plays wildly Solo.
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