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France
I love my country.
Paris is the most beautiful city in the world.
I love the people and i love the way they dress.
Montmartre is my favorite place with lot of little street and all the painter in the street.
I love read a book in Luxembourg's garden and eat an ice cream.

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- France
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句子 1
- I love my country.
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句子 2
- Paris is the most beautiful city in the world.
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句子 3
- I love the people and i love the way they dress.
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句子 4
- Montmartre is my favorite place with lot of little street and all the painter in the street.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- I love read a book in Luxembourg's garden and eat an ice cream.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5