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  • My kitty

    • I'm doin' my thing, when my kitten came, jumped and sat on my lap, I love my cat, but today she dont want that I work, then, I went to my bed , brought her, and hands on the cat for tickle to my kitty.
  • I feel very relaxing when I do tickle my cat.
  • I took affection for the cats when I drew a little cat on my notebook in the art class, from that day onwards I love the cats, my cell phone is a little cat, my key chain is a cat from "chi's sweet home".
    • Today my cat started to venture at Xiomy's home, but meow when she saw the dog.
  • Now, I'm going to feed my kitty and latter I'm going to take my dinner, and probably I started to long in my favorite place where I'm with Xiomy and Fifi my kitty :D

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    • I took affection for the cats when I drew a little cat on my notebook in the art class, from that day onwards I love the cats, my cell phone is a little cat, my key chain is a cat from "chi's sweet home".
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    • Today my cat started to venture at Xiomy's home, but meow when she saw the dog.
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    • «Les enquêteurs ont l’impression que c’était le jour de la fin (…), poursuit le procureur, il s’est rasé la barbe en arrivant à Strasbourg, ce quighkl est, paraît-il, un signe de passage à l’acte.» Ce matin-là, la compagne du suspect est dans l’appartement, mais dans une autre pièce, avec ses deux enfants, une fille de six ans et un nourrisson.
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    • Now, I'm going to feed my kitty and latter I'm going to take my dinner, and probably I started to long in my favorite place where I'm with Xiomy and Fifi my kitty :D
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