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I want to describe my feelings about “The Ninth Wave”.

It is generally believed that it is masterpiece painted by famous seascapist Ivan Aivazovskyi.

It is enough the first sight on the picture for feeling of power and might of it.

When I see that, I feel the delight and I am affected.

Moreover, image of destroying and uncontrollable raged storm made me gasp and feel intake of breath.

Because of energy of sea, I am missing in very realistic waves and their force.

Besides it is impossible to put into words how you can be lost at the arrangement of colors and shades.

I want to conclude by saying that “The Ninth Wave” is picture that really can make you feel a lump in your throat, because Aivazovskyi perfectly impacted his keenly feeling nature of sea.

(It is important to use Participle in text.

Maybe are there more simply way to enter ones into the text?)