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  • Last night after my dinner i went to my friend's room where some of my friends were already there.They were fighting with pillow's so i also joined them.We were enjoying that moment suddenly two of my friend's started fighting seriously.They both were pulling each other hairs and were punching each other.The moment of joy suddenly turned into serious fight.

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    • Last night after my dinner i went to my friend's room where some of my friends were already there.They were fighting with pillow's so i also joined them.We were enjoying that moment suddenly two of my friend's started fighting seriously.They both were pulling each other hairs and were punching each other.The moment of joy suddenly turned into serious fight.
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